Within

I sought you, breathless.
Combing the ends of myself,
I found you within.

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2 comments on “Within

  1. Arthur says:

    I love the second line in the Haiku — the ‘turn.’ The other two lines are given tremendous power through the image of you “combing your ends.” A great image of love that lies within, yes, but there is an image in there that takes some grappling with the “combing” as if you’re pulling out the knots of long hair to free something there … and there is a sensuality in the action as well. Very tender and real ….

    • Arthur – somehow you understood exactly the imagery i was aiming to evoke. Thank you for commenting and sharing what you felt and saw in this. This fulfills purpose for me.

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